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    dots Submission Name: Romeo Killed Julietdots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 48
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    dotsRomeo Killed Julietdots
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    S*T*A*R*C*R*O*S*S*E*D

    But she wanted him all the same.
    And now it's all messed up
    Juliet is not fully to blame.

    But Romeo left
    Told her she lost him
    Took her smile
    And left her with tears..

    Romeo killed Juliet..
    Now she's laying broken in the dark
    Crying of an aching heart.
    She thought she had finally found him..
    The one who would understand..
    Now she realizes she's [[unloveable]]

    She doesnt blame Romeo for leaving her
    She tried to tell him she wasnt so great
    But oh how she wish he'd come back..
    She cant say she's sorry
    Because she did nothing wrong
    But she can say she wants him..
    Maybe needs him..
    To smile and laugh..

    But it's ok Romeo..
    Juliet understands.




    Submitted on 2008-07-18 20:28:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i feel you are putting yourself in tese roles and that excellent. you are bring out the best in these charactors. your poetry is standing room only. i must say, you put alot in your work
    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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