Here Without You by BrokenAngelKat

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Submission Name: Here Without You dots

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Author:	BrokenAngelKat
ASL Info:	17-F-NC
Elite Ratio:	1.66 - 99/230/185
Words:	36

Class/Type:	Misc/Depressed
Total Views:	58
Average Vote:	2.0000
Bytes:	192

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Here Without You dots

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When you gave me part of you
I thought it would be forever
But in my reckless panic
I lost everything I wanted
And now
I'm lost in here without you

Submitted on 2008-07-18 20:32:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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you will find away and you are not alone. great piece, shows alot of emotions. keep writing
| Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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