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    dots Submission Name: Reaching Infinitydots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    19/M/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    7.15 - 135/98/95
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 31
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 469



    Description:
       The sequel to "Seeking for Infinity". I now feel much more complete.


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    dotsReaching Infinitydots
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    I am divided.

    But...I see my heart growing.
    One size, two size,
    three sizes. Growing and filling
    with light.

    I look off into the horizon sunset,
    and I am at peace.
    I know now where my hand should be at.
    I put it to the plow and I do not look back.

    I am no longer divided.
    I drift gently down the Jordan
    river, complete.

    I have reached infinity. Forever.




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 01:39:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      when i read this i think biblically.
    perhaps it is because i am sposed to be creating a sermon for next sunday... i dont know. but all i can think when i read this is 'a house/kingdom divided against itself will fall' and then theres the not looking back/hand at the plow thing too which i am sure is in some kind of parable or teaching somewhere...


    anyways... i like the way the division becomes less fractitious [sp?] and the way wholeness seems to occur when peace is found.
    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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