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    dots Submission Name: And when the lark flies...dots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    19/M/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 162/151/126
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 489



    Description:
       This piece came about while I was listening to the song "Houses of the Holy" by Led Zeppelin. It helps if you listen to that song before you read this, actually.


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    dotsAnd when the lark flies...dots
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    We've got to escape the highway.
    Girl, we've got to make our way home.
    This world is full of oppression,
    and poisons unknown.

    So let us travel to the mountains
    and stand upon the ancient rock,
    where no one will stop our groovin'
    and no one will stop our talk.

    And when the lark flies overhead
    while our hearts are in our mouths,
    we all get a little dizzy
    and follow his love South.




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 01:44:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the Zep - We just rented Song Remains The Same and like Floyd films I love the various elements of creativity!

    I chose to listen to Pink Floyd; "Fearless" when I read this & I'm favin this because "IT" captures my mood in the NOW ~*~

    I hope your summer is going well!

    love,peace,joy,abundance 7 smiles to share =-)
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-07-29 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      EXCELLENT JOB!!!!!
    I found this write to be very dreamy and I have got to be honest here this would make an absolutely beautiful song
    Again Great Write!!!!!!!
    Thank You for sharing this
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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