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    dots Submission Name: Swamp Mandots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 29/60/51
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 942



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    dotsSwamp Mandots
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    Swamp man
    Witness the glory as you can see him chompin’ down
    Searchin’ underground
    Some might find him a hero; space migration can’t find him a home
    He’s stuck here on the ground
    Psychedelic gleam in his eye as he would chomp ‘em down
    Mow ‘em down

    And all I could conjure to offer
    Were my tears from turning blue
    Got lost in the perilous chapel
    But somehow you made it through

    And I could swear you were pulling me
    And I could swear you were guiding the way
    And at the very edge of reason
    You swear with me, you felt the same

    You better pray boy, ‘cause from now on it’s gonna be like this…
    You did it to yourself, you just had to chomp down, mow down

    Didn’t you say you wanted this?
    Could have sworn you prayed
    You should have heard you beg
    To get it to go away




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 02:54:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very Very Interesting write!!
    I am not sure exactly how to interpatate this write but to me you are speaking of perhaps the Homeless and how hard their life is for them to live
    I only disagree with one thing
    In some cases they did not to it top themselves as they could have some mental illness they have no control ever
    Very well written
    I really like the way this all came together
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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