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    dots Submission Name: A Call Can Change Everythingdots
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    Author: narutorules17
    ASL Info:    12, f, WI
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 8/14/22
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 534



    Description:
       one call is all it takes.


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    dots A Call Can Change Everythingdots
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    A Call Can Change Everything.
    You hear the phone ring.
    Ring.....Ring.......Ring.
    You pick it up.
    Someone says: Hello? Hello? Is someone there?
    You answer with a shaky voice: Y.....Yes. Who is this?
    The phone is quiet.
    No one answers.
    Deep........Deep......Deep........Deep.....Deep.
    The person is gone as fast as they came.
    The phone drops out of you hand.
    Ring.........Ring........Ring.
    Hello? Hello? Is someone there?
    None thingness.




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 04:45:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this poem is confusing but i enjoyed that about it.

    bye the way here [None thingness] i think u meant nothingness i'm not sure but maybe.
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]
      huh?
    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      in the blink of an eye, we are, then we are not, the blink of an eye. pe
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]



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