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    dots Submission Name: Soft Rush of the Breezedots
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    Author: Guermo
    ASL Info:    18 / M / Va, USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.3 - 133/156/112
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       A bit on inspiration, and letting the words come, not forcing them


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    dotsSoft Rush of the Breezedots
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    The pitter patter of the keys
    The soft rush of the breeze
    A passer by looks at you
    You smile because it’s polite to do
    Back to work with hurried hand
    To get this manuscript to the stand

    A page here a chapter there
    Sometimes you just sit and stare
    A mind under pressure is no mind at all
    Think where you’re going or prepare for a fall
    When ‘The Block’ sets in you know you’re done
    And an empty mind means no words or fun

    So free yourself from the daily grind
    Relax your body and calm your mind
    Let your fingers work, they know what to do
    And before you know it the draft is through
    You found inspiration among the trees
    And the soft rush of the breeze.




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 05:58:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is good advice for somone with 'writer's block.' It works !!!
    Also good adivce for solving indecisions.
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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