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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    20/f/WA or IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 354/430/184
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 45
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    Bytes: 1202



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    I'm gonna tell you this the same way
    I told someone else, across the lines,
    with some choice words about my choice.
    I just want you to know.

    That I'm not alright,
    and I'm not alright with this.
    You want to fight me on this point,
    with this point in my hand, oh,
    I'm not allowed to do it, you say
    "Don't you dare," or "I don't give a fuck,"
    and leave me to my own demise.

    But I promise I'm alright.
    I'm just not alright with this, it isn't
    fair, you can't make that call.
    You can judge my choice of pain but
    if it's pleasure you're after I have to stay
    in the shadows, please be silent.

    Tell me how this is right.
    Tell me there is justice between
    what I do and what you do and
    please pull it all back and say
    you know it's gonna be alright.

    Like I've said before, you're just
    killing yourself slower than I am,
    you're just taking your time.
    And I don't want to be there
    when it ends.




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