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A life without you: Good riddance

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
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A life without you: Good riddance

You left.
I gave you my heart
And you all left.
I will give up on you now
And maybe one day you’ll return to me
But by then I will have forgotten,
what our lives used to be.
I will have gotten used to
A life without you.

At first it will hurt,
Your names will singe my heart
But I have figured out
You only loved me at the start.
Love is supposed to grow
and be unconditional
Instead yours became abysmal.

And all of a sudden it’s like I didn’t matter
My big heart full of hope, shattered.
I’ll never be what I used to and
I’ll just have to get used to
a life without you.

Submitted on 2008-07-19 15:15:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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