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    dots Submission Name: A life without you: Good riddancedots
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    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA life without you: Good riddancedots
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    You left.
    I gave you my heart
    And you all left.
    I will give up on you now
    And maybe one day youíll return to me
    But by then I will have forgotten,
    what our lives used to be.
    I will have gotten used to
    A life without you.

    At first it will hurt,
    Your names will singe my heart
    But I have figured out
    You only loved me at the start.
    Love is supposed to grow
    and be unconditional
    Instead yours became abysmal.

    And all of a sudden itís like I didnít matter
    My big heart full of hope, shattered.
    Iíll never be what I used to and
    Iíll just have to get used to
    a life without you.




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