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My own truth

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 61
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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My own truth

I was sullied and scorned
Fowled and betrayed
Left behind to just fade away.

I want to say I’m lost
But I am not needy
I don’t need you to read a map
I don’t need your hand to grasp

I’ll grow up and grow out of you
Believe in myself, for I am
My own truth..

Submitted on 2008-07-19 15:26:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this peice shows your strength to be yourself, and trusting who you know you are, thats awesome, i love it, great job

| Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  Standing your ground with this piece. Showing that inner shell has strength and good will. great piece. check out my page
| Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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