My own truth by LadyMerlina

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Submission Name: My own truth dots

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Author:	LadyMerlina
ASL Info:	24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:	3.07 - 60/93/58
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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My own truth dots

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I was sullied and scorned
Fowled and betrayed
Left behind to just fade away.

I want to say I’m lost
But I am not needy
I don’t need you to read a map
I don’t need your hand to grasp

I’ll grow up and grow out of you
Believe in myself, for I am
My own truth..

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this peice shows your strength to be yourself, and trusting who you know you are, thats awesome, i love it, great job

Joy
| Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
Standing your ground with this piece. Showing that inner shell has strength and good will. great piece. check out my page
| Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.