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    dots Submission Name: My own truthdots
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    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy own truthdots
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    I was sullied and scorned
    Fowled and betrayed
    Left behind to just fade away.

    I want to say Iím lost
    But I am not needy
    I donít need you to read a map
    I donít need your hand to grasp

    Iíll grow up and grow out of you
    Believe in myself, for I am
    My own truth..




    Submitted on 2008-07-19 15:26:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this peice shows your strength to be yourself, and trusting who you know you are, thats awesome, i love it, great job

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    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      Standing your ground with this piece. Showing that inner shell has strength and good will. great piece. check out my page
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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