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    dots Submission Name: The Monsterdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 387
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Religious
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    Description:
       i don't remember much about the day, except that leo, my youth pastor, was teaching out of Matthew 5 (the sermon on the mount) that sunday, and it was compelling to me as i sat in my usual spot on the comfy couch in the back of the room while sipping my monster khaos. i just had some inspiration that followed, and out comes this poem that turned out to be an acronym for monster and was similar in style to Matt 5. so here it is.


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    dotsThe Monsterdots
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    Make the most of every opportunity
    that comes your way
    Or your life will be filled with all the "what ifs"
    left over from yesterday
    Never let yourself get caught up in the standards
    of what is and isn't cool
    Stand up for your beliefs and be firm,
    or you will fall for everything else
    Think of others more than yourself
    and help those that are in need
    Even if they are not very nice to you,
    or you just don't like them at all
    Remember to keep GOD first in everything
    and that your light shines for Him


    Listen to my advice,
    and ye shall be wise
    Heed me not, and you will unleash
    The Monster...




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      This is really incouraging for me, I often second guess my self everyday.
    I get stuck in the flow of the world, that I lose sight of the real goal of my life, which is to serve GOD.
    I like how it just tells the truth about every day life.
    Thank you gwenn for writing this.
    | Posted on 2013-02-16 00:00:00 | by EragonaElven | [ Reply to This ]
      Apparently the monster in us rears its ugly head a little whenever we fail such ideals. I wish they were taught better today when we witness so much monstrous stuff.
    | Posted on 2011-05-14 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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