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Hell is not the Fire and Brimstone of the Old Testament.
Hell may be the absence of God's love or the inability to pray.
I know that Hell is endless nights of hallucinations.
Darkened thoughts whispering behind you on parched skin wings.
Eyes spread wide by an evil wanting-
Watching Love's needle's thumping-
Sewing to a timeless pumping-
Their Flesh to a Crimson Daemons' joining-
Your friends are now of hell.
Hell is a locked off-white room with a foreign language scribbled on the walls; the center piece a 12 inch with rabbit ears.
Hell is a place where every ounce of sustenance you consume returns identifiable 4-6 hours later.
Loneliness and a needle.
Hell is a place where the activity of the day is to stab yourself a thousand times...
And it's the best part of your week.
Submitted on 2008-07-19 18:02:20
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Wow, this is a really disturbing piece. It just gives such a foreboding tone. Really a pretty strong work and a piece i would definitely be proud of. Good work.
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