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Author: UnspokenDreamer
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It hangs around like winter in the spring.
It seems during that time of year that
everything is screaming for Summer,
for Sunlight.
The quantity is a variable of little value.
It has nothing to do with the number of
people that surround me.
It's deeper.
It resonates with the sounds of
Companionship, Family, Intimacy...
There is no number of faces that can claim a
space reserved for One.
My greatest is fear is not being alone.
It is settling for someone or something
that I know I don't really want
in order to run from the pain.

God bring me a friend who is closer that all these acquaintances.

Submitted on 2008-07-20 02:36:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  we are all lonely in some way, aching for a connection which transcends... everything. it's there somewhere, but it's a wavery journey.

hold your head high.
at least you're searching, right?
| Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by discombobulated | [ Reply to This ]

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