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    dots Submission Name: Ignorant Shitdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsIgnorant Shitdots
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    before you
    I feel so helpless
    I feel like I've been on the map for hours, I've been walking down the roads, I've been going the wrong way
    I started out wrong
    or I started out right
    but what is unfair is unfair now
    and there is no clear path to take

    I know that I want to fly off this plane without jumping
    I could see myself in the air
    with you holding me there

    I do know that i don't mind the view from here
    if you were satisfied




    Submitted on 2008-07-20 14:49:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This seems to be about how you or someone else has lead you down some path that you are now not sure if you should have went down. But it doesn't matter to you right now cause you are pretty much ok with whatever gets thrown at you -- cause you find the bright side of everything.
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      So it's about someone who has helped you take a good direction in life, but now something they want is going to seperate you from him/her.

    Strange title name. Ignorant [censored]...
    were you the one who was ignorant before that special person came along?

    Is the curseword "[censored]" a reflection of your self image? i dont know... but it was a fun read!

    (also you are pretty)
    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]


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