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    dots Submission Name: Pushing me, pulling medots
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    Author: wordsofmind
    ASL Info:    18/F/Quebec, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 175/174/54
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPushing me, pulling medots
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    Oh, Costa Rica here I come!
    To taste the great and the sublime
    And to forget everyday life.
    Alone this time, I fear,
    For, alas, you stay here.

    My second day is passing slowly:
    Already I miss my home.
    But most of all I miss you, love.
    To feel your being here, I pray.
    Albeit, I have been pushed away.

    I call to you to say I’m good,
    While inside, I’m agonizing.
    You are good, you say, as well,
    But in your voice I sense the burn
    For my safe and prompt return.

    At last, you tell me
    You miss me so
    Amongst other loving words.
    “Honey, it’s just not the same.
    Forgive me; I’m the one to blame.”

    I do my everything to come home faster
    From paradise to my lover’s arms.
    Here I am at your doorstep.
    Your reaction, “Already here?
    For now, I want to be alone, my dear.”

    You’re pushing me,
    Then pulling me -
    Please make up your mind.
    I’m not a puppet on a string,
    But a fragile human being.

    (Oh, how I wish to be
    In your life entirely
    For joys,
    For sorrows,
    For all times.)




    Submitted on 2008-07-20 21:03:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your love for Costa Rica is deep in your heart. your words are divine. you sending vibes of truthfulness to your readers. keep writing. check out my page
    | Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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