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    dots Submission Name: Evils of lovedots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 84
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       something i wrote when i thought i wouldnt ever get to talk to my bf again


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    dotsEvils of lovedots
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    To tear two apart that have become bonded
    Is truly a cruel deed,
    but to destroy a love that they had worked very hard to build together,
    is thee most high of evils.
    To leave them in a most terrible state of being.
    To make them feel as if they had lost it all
    To make them feel as if they no longer had each other.
    But even when all seems lost
    all seems completely hopeless
    there love, so true, pure and real
    Will triumph over the darkest of times.
    As there lips come together
    they whisper to each other the same question
    Do you love me?
    and with the same reply at the same time
    there lips finally touch
    and they embrace each other for what could be the last time.




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