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Author: save me
ASL Info:    19/F
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Words: 20
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Depressed
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will always remember you.
no matter what.
i hope you know that.
i love you so much.
rest in peace.

Submitted on 2008-07-21 09:09:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  doesn't know what to say.. just so simple. well words don't have to long, simple words are the best
| Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]
  straight to the point. sending a signal in words. keep writing. great piece. check out my page
| Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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