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Submission Name: I dots

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Author:	save me
ASL Info:	19/F
Elite Ratio:	1.88 - 22/42/37
Words:	20

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Depressed
Total Views:	62
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	126

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will always remember you.
no matter what.
i hope you know that.
i love you so much.
rest in peace.

Submitted on 2008-07-21 09:09:49 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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doesn't know what to say.. just so simple. well words don't have to long, simple words are the best
| Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]
straight to the point. sending a signal in words. keep writing. great piece. check out my page
| Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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