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    Author: Sirbongatron
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 19/18/21
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    These dreams inside are only a part
    Of this blank canvas I hide at heart
    Stark white you see; it craves the painter’s mark
    Through vales and shadows I trail the brush
    Darkness and vagrant souls guide us

    Change of space and time at hand
    Melting winds roll cross the hand
    Black and white this land ahead
    I hear the cries of my long given dead
    Though distant willows call my name
    I travel on head hung in shame

    The canvas rests upon my chest
    Frozen limbs that claw at me; dead fingers grasp round weakening knee
    Dash through frigid pools of daggered ice
    Plow through fields of dancing flame
    Can’t comprehend the crimson pain

    But up ahead there maybe be hope!
    A single strand of a light I saw,
    And then her face so pale and tall.
    Locks raven cloak that face with lust,
    Stretch down her crimson vest
    Natural beauty from darkness rose
    A light
    Upon my canvas of lustful woes
    The painter dormant
    Hidden soul




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