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    Author: essence of life
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 33/38/21
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsa feelingdots
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    A feeling just came over me.

    Not sure why but I just felt sad. "Depression lurks."

    I heard that before know I believe it.

    Never thought i could feel this way.

    Guess I was wrong i have been lately.

    My minds clouded and I feel sad.

    My hearts close now i feel mad.

    I want me back myself the one who felt loved and was thinking.

    I hope this isn't another change.




    Submitted on 2008-07-22 04:57:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great poem right 2 the point. i sometimes get like that also
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by narutorules17 | [ Reply to This ]


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