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    dots Submission Name: The Paindots
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    Author: narutorules17
    ASL Info:    12, f, WI
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 8/14/22
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 123
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 329



    Description:
       its a feeling u get when ur mad, hurt, sad, or any other emotion.


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    dotsThe Paindots
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    The Pain.
    The feeling you get when you know something is wrong, a feeling that numbs your stomach.
    The pain that never goes away.
    It numbs you from the inside out till theres nonething left
    You cant move, cant breath.
    It starts to fade away but a little part is still there inside you waiting.




    Submitted on 2008-07-22 05:13:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this poem was too the point i like that about it. i believe i know the way u feel here. keep writing ur poems
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]



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