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Building Momentum

Author: SinCeer05
ASL Info:    21mVA
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havent posted in a good minute...thought i'd throw somethin up

Building Momentum

Building Momentum

I exhibit the tranquil chaos, of a strangled Adolf, rioting an Angels séance
A diversion of a brethrens hope
while relations pace lost, with statements paid off, by the Archaic fake Gods,
the disturbance is selective trope

get trashed with divine rage, click, click, symbiotic castanets high gauged
To damage ya life veins, left ‘out of ya realm’ like being cast for the Ninth Gate
On the brink of wars Holy ghost, he who thwarts, mostly boasts..
a link to warn, souls an goats, ‘expect a return’ like Bill Gates Portfolio
inflicting prose as a misanthrope, like listen Hoe,
a dames thong, our ‘Date On’(Dayton), have ya missing spokes…
Thatz just the beginning, expect a double helix convergence
As I turn people to servants, evil with a lethal deterrence
Pipe bombs so the cookie crumbles…I’m the Keeblers insurgent
When I prey upon the cretins, I’ll enflame the psalms of heathens
‘Draggin’ ya beliefs through Triad oaths like an Asian mob allegiance (dragon)
as the days is long an breathin, the rays will dawn ya reason…
u think doin labor, while heaven with a slurpee is getting paid upon completion?
that’s an immigrant innocence, societies kindred wince in repents
still on the surface, cant see a glaciers danger without Inuit vigilance
a puppet afraid to get ya feet wet, building momentum without kinetic etiquette
no segued rhetoric, I’m ‘burning the strings’ with a Jimi Hendrix penmanship
its no ‘current’ debate like stations with a crew, ‘anchoring’ the news,
that I’m ‘tribal bitch, when I shake spears’ for the Taming of a shrew…
observations have ya ‘body scanned’ when ur a ‘patient’ in the nude,
cant get ya ‘hours back’ not even with daylight savings in ya youth
smokin blunts like Jamaicans in a room…’weights’ within the truth..
u just pickin up speed for the ice ahead, remember theres danger in the ‘luge’

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