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    dots Submission Name: No Meaning Anymoredots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    21/f/amarillo Tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 983/1059/228
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
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    dotsNo Meaning Anymoredots
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    I apologize so much these days
    Trying to spare your 'feelings'
    It doesn't even have a meaning any more
    "I'm sorry" I mumble again,
    I'm sorry I woke up
    I'm sorry I talked to you,
    That I didn't get your coke before you asked
    I apologize for not getting you a cigarette before you finished hacking up your lungs when you first wake up
    And that I don't know what sorry means any more.
    I'm sorry for snapping back at you for yelling me.
    Sorry for not really being sorry.
    I don't love you anymore.
    But,
    I can't say that, cause I'd just have to say Sorry
    Again.




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      sometime there are just no words. Everything has been said and one too many appologies is just one to many.
    jan
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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