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    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 658
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1193



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       for my beaver (and yes i know its not grammer checked or spell checked)


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    dotsa memorydots
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    this story starts with a girl one lost and confused she finds her self in a world of hate anger and lust can she tell the people she loves shes gay? can she tell the girl she grew up with she loves her or will she do as she always does and look at her admiring the way the pencil sits in her hand gently been pressed in between her fingel tips or how her eyes gaze the page reading the short novel that the teacher gave out the week before she turns and smiles blushing (what to do) smile back? a nod of the head is all that comes out she giggels. heart rasing the butterflys wont calm down u want so badly to take her and kiss the lips that have been talking every day sence 10th grade walk up to her place a hand gently on her soft skin and kiss her hoping she will kiss back wanting to take her on the desk and make love to her like no other has ever tried. the bell rings class is over u dont even know what the homework is. good and excuse for a "work night" knowing that wont happen the real work is the drawing of her getting every detail in place the shading it has to be perfect as tho DaVinci himself had came accross this perfection and had to draw it as shall I




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