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    dots Submission Name: Lay Downdots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    17/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 301/289/112
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    I lay down in the grass. I felt your shadow where you were suposed to be. I reached in my pocket, withdrew my music. And cried just a little. Times have gotten rough. In every sense of the word. I let so much consume me. Now I let it free.

    I lay in the grass, and wish were with me. I could almost hear your voice, "What on Earth are you doing?", And my lazy reply,"Laying on Earth." I put my arm over my eyes. I can't think strait for the sun.

    I lay in the grass, wondering why more people don't. The dogs bark, the children cry, bills go unpaid, but, in the grass, nothing matters. I understand what is so beautiful about living on.

    I lay in the grass, I feel a shadow fall across my face. I unwrap my arm from my face and look up, It's my captor, my time is up. I must go in. I look up at the barbwire fence, then to the sky. Then I sigh, and head in, because I can't fly away this time.




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      baby
    I know its hard okay and trust me it get hard for me to and yes I wish I were there so i could wrap you up and never let go.
    but also baby we gotta take one day at an time
    okay I love you
    be strong my dear hold on
    Love~Darrell
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
      ummm...barbed wire fencing? where the devil were you, my Angel?!

    this is beautiful. i love, love, love the imagery!

    that's my girl!!!

    love and kisses,
    hugz and misses,

    Mummie
    | Posted on 2008-07-22 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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