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    dots Submission Name: sleepless nightdots
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    Author: essence of life
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 33/38/21
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotssleepless nightdots
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    I hear people suffer from sleepless nights.

    I like too sleep it takes me out this lie I live.

    Sleep is the key too sanity thats what I believe.

    A sleepless night might just send me off the deep end.

    I've never had one I don't even want one.

    Its life I might get one. One night after day were a I can't sleep.

    A sleepless night.




    Submitted on 2008-07-22 18:14:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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