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    dots Submission Name: Revelations (End of a Masquerade)dots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 75/179/84
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsRevelations (End of a Masquerade)dots
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    Color fades all to black
    And the curtain lowers on this charade
    We take off our masks
    And turn to meet face-to-face



    I hesitate to let you see
    The girl behind the smoke and lace
    What would you think of me,
    The person you've always had to chase?



    I prepare to run to spare myself
    From the look that your eyes will get
    When you meet the hideous creature
    That you have not seen yet



    I feel a touch on my shoulder
    And I freeze where I stand
    How could it be that you make me feel?
    Paralyze me with a touch of your hand?



    The masquerade is up-
    And I turn and let the mask fall
    I look up to meet your eyes-
    And there's no one there at all.





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