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    dots Submission Name: He's opened my eyesdots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 487



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    dotsHe's opened my eyesdots
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    He found me when I was lost.
    He was stuck in the same boat,
    Or so he said.

    With an instant connection,
    We began to talk.
    He made me laugh..
    And smile.
    A real smile..
    Which was a gift..
    For a real smile was so rare.

    Time went on..
    And he became more important.
    I felt redeemed in the eyes of life.

    He still makes me feel special.
    And I hope he never leaves..




    Submitted on 2008-07-23 05:51:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very deep , to the point. this mystery man of yours keep reappearing. great piece
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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