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    dots Submission Name: Hold Infinity in His Handdots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    71 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 135/103/70
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 73
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       In this poem I endeavoured to portray my heritage in Israel from Ezekiel 37 from whence the dried bones of His Nation Israel will rise again from the desert: seen as this world - forever. Joachim.


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    Hold Infinity in His Hand!

    He walked the Walk of Life
    He crossed the Seas of Bliss
    He Climbed the Highest Mountain
    He Descended down the Deep!

    Before Him
    The Sands of the Dessert parted,
    shaped as a Hand
    Reaching searching probing
    The bleached remains of its Victims.

    Behind Him
    The hand of the Miser
    Gluttony shaped with Despair
    Softly sweeping in the shadows
    Marrow bone and hair!

    Before Him
    The Mind of the Fool
    Empty dead forlorn.
    Forever Seeking Touching
    The Fringes of the Dawn.

    With Him
    The Song of Death
    Reaching Screeching Fear
    the Sounds of Silence
    To all to Hear.

    Then He Knelt Down
    Bowed His Head
    and Prayed!

    Out of Heaven reached a Hand
    Filled with Roses Pardon and Lore
    Softly touching Hearts of Sand
    Caressing Healing in its Touch.

    He Opened His Mind
    And the Hand of Sand
    Became a Desert
    Each grain a Harvest
    Each bone a Man.

    Forever!


    Ezekiel 37.















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    ||| Comments |||
      im with beulah on this one.
    my sermon isnt until sunday which is still a couple of sleeps away and im still completely unprepared but interestingly enough i have been thinking about the valley of dry bones most of the week and so i will have to explore this passage of scripture and see what it is i am needing to share from it...

    i like the end... the grains of sand being the harvest... countless as the stars in the sky or the grains of sand so will be your descendants... right?

    beautiful.
    | Posted on 2008-07-24 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      The cross references and interpretation of the Scripture is absolutely amazing. I truly enjoyed this deep and profound poem.

    Very well written and a definite fav.
    | Posted on 2008-07-23 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]


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