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    dots Submission Name: Charismsdots
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    Author: realpoet
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    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Ifone has a charism
    it can not be held within
    lest it be a pharisaism
    like eating the truth and giving only a grin.

    To each a charismis given
    not for one's merit and glory
    but for a lifting up and to enliven
    the world with the truth of its story.

    The truth of a charism's reach
    is not for the charismatic only,
    it is for the truth of its teach
    for the kind, the haughty and the lonely.

    If one has the charism of love
    it must not be a barn unto its self
    not as a sacrifice of offering a dove
    as if it were the only offering left.

    If one has the charism of tongues
    and jabbers in the halls all day
    until the wind fell out of the lungs,
    of what good potion if understand had not say.

    Charism has a fiery furnace to stoke;
    its embers must not be left to ash
    lest its Fireman come to invoke
    its possessor with the grace of a lash.

    Cage not your charism as if for a circus act ,
    it is a gift of greater showmanship
    than any tent's fiery preacher's flack ;
    so,go forth,not with a bowman's quip.





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