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    dots Submission Name: Don't make me say itdots
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    Author: SaddenedSongbrd
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 7/19/27
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsDon't make me say itdots
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    Abused
    Don't make me say it
    Don't make me go there

    Salt on Wounds
    Don't force me to rip
    That cut open again

    Sadness, solitude
    It's swallowing a huge pill
    Without water

    Insomnia;
    It's raw vulnerability
    It eats me alive
    Cursed, forever

    Cowards run
    Left to devour the memories.
    I deflate
    Crumbling under expectations.

    I am not whole
    Broken dreams,
    Victim Role.

    don't make me say it-
    Damaged.




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      i wrote a piece about being raped in rome a coupla years ago... and in it i said 'you can break my body but you cant break me'
    thats how i genuinely feel. he never took anything coz i never gave him anything to take... sometimes i think its all about perspective... sometimes i think we label ourselves and then try to live up to that label...

    im sorry you have been through whatever it is you have been through and i can completely understand you not "wanting to go there" but just know that there can be healing and wholeness... that what has happened in the past through no fault of your own doesnt have to dictate your future...

    i know its a random offer since you dont know me at all but if you ever need someone to talk to im just a PM away...
    | Posted on 2008-08-01 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like the classic case of torment to me. But did you know putting salt in the wounds is suppose to help you heal faster? yeah u probably knew that it also caused more pain too...

    it seems it haunts you even more that you were damaged in the process of being abused. well good luck. nice poem.
    | Posted on 2008-07-25 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]



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