Your poem brings me to believe that surely there is something stirring in the air on soaring wings of messengers that
The Event Of The Ages is about to break through the clouds and reign supreme on Earth. Though we say we love, our understanding of His Justice keeps us perennialy on the same track of our disobedience. This poem truly portrays why poets are able to portray the truth.
Pretty epic and i found the way you emphasize the last lines of each stanza with an exclamation point. The effect it had on me was that it made the lines seperated from the rest of the stanza. It breaks the flow to shout something at the end if that makes sense.
Submission Name: He Cometh – Prepare!
