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    dots Submission Name: Hypnotizeddots

    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Maybe it's not the best i could do...but i wrote it like it was...i love someone who doesn't love me..we have loved together but can not BE together...and this is for her..

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    I can not hide in the light,
    With that hypnotized gleam,
    In my eye.
    So i leave with this, girl, in my mind

    My heart will start race;
    Just to think of her face.
    (As i cuddle myself in her palm.)

    A hole starts sinking within me...
    Just like always,
    When i think of her.
    She is my ball and chain,
    That keeps me attached to the world.
    And i love her,
    Like always.

    I am holding this pen, in my hand...
    Scribbling words when,
    I don't know what to write.
    How can i say what i feel everyday,
    When she already knows?
    Liking the fact it feels wrong but so right;
    Like always i'm pushed aside...
    Letting light fade,away, into night.

    I set myself nxet to this girl.
    Try to see the flaws in me.
    And i try to compare,
    With what's not standing there,
    Feeling worse,
    I don't want to be free...

    I look back at myself in the mirror.
    Just thinking of her, my heart burns.
    But even though she's dug this hole,
    I don't cry...
    I only wear that hypnotized gleam in my eye.

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