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    dots Submission Name: Rush on into Agedots
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    Author: AptPupilofLife2
    ASL Info:    18/M/Berkeley,CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.82 - 112/129/47
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 23
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 536



    Description:
       It's been a long time since I wrote, and I'm in a new relationship, and this kinda poppsed in. I feel like I might have stretched the ryhme, but not sure. and I feel like it lacks a conclusive feel, but I haven't one at the moment, just the ride. so I let it be.


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    dotsRush on into Agedots
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    Timid quick; at the slightest touch
    Laugh a little and a little too much
    Hesitating, smiling pairs they blush
    On into age, the young lovers rush

    Clasping hands and tangled sheets
    Contented sighs bought oh so cheap
    But in these nightly little treats
    Tomorrow’s restlessness we reap

    Wasting worry during daily trite trials
    At the impermanence of last night’s smiles
    To be proven false, or true each night
    In the hurried pauses of young moonlight




    Submitted on 2008-07-25 07:23:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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