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    dots Submission Name: Fairy Taildots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 627



    Description:
       something i wrote in one of my oddball moods look at my journal


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    dotsFairy Taildots
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    My life has become a Fairy Tail.
    You call me you're princess,
    and you're my knight in shining armor.
    The way you love me makes me drift,
    I'm drifting in a sea of stars.
    The moon is full every night,
    Never any clouds the weather is perfect.
    You left me speechless,
    after you slipped a ring on my finger,
    and not just any finger,
    My wedding finger.
    Now you got me singing everyday.
    This princess is truly happy,
    and this princess will live happily ever after,
    as long as its with my knight in shining armor.




    Submitted on 2008-07-25 15:59:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your work is nice. show feelings into fairy tail land.
    | Posted on 2008-07-26 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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