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If god willing.

Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:    22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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If god willing.

In the midnight hour,
I could only see—
The expression on that face
When you look at me.

Couldn’t help but see
The feelings you have—
Is it real?
Was it deceit?
How could I be the ultimate judge
Of the mystery inside that shell
And the endless thoughts of your mind.

If one could only see the colors inside this body—
Hold on tight,
And never let me go—
Dance with me,
Become the yearning passion—
Kill the doubt
And never ever leave this soul behind.

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