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    dots Submission Name: I hate this fucking floordots
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    Author: EileenToTheLeft
    ASL Info:    28/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 16/36/55
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI hate this fucking floordots
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    "Do you see it?"

    Cluttered floors, socks and books and cardboard boxes.
    Am I shrinking? Losing wrinkles, even?
    We rest in this mess and
    secretly I hate it.

    "Eileen...
    Eileen."

    What is it?

    "Do you see it?"

    The mismatched socks I've lost here in the past few weeks?

    "Do you see the veins on my hands?"

    There they are,
    protruding outward, all of them, like I'd never care to witness.
    Little tunnels beneath the flesh, traveling towards
    nowhere.
    Just traveling.
    I see them as uplifted dirt, voles burrowing through the ground.
    Myself, a child, stomping them back down.
    But, this is her blood,
    the life of which, ready to jump out from it's veil of skin.
    The pressure, still pounding against my continued silence.

    "Pretty cool, isn't it?"

    I should agree, but I know that life means ill for me.

    "If I squeeze my arm really tight, they get even bigger!"

    Please don't.
    Can't you clean your room?




    Submitted on 2008-07-25 18:21:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really weird poem and even though I feel lost reading it I also feel like I have been there too.
    | Posted on 2013-03-15 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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