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    dots Submission Name: Dear Amber/Sleep Talkingdots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Comedy
    Total Views: 179
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    Bytes: 849



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       Apparently I've been a very active sleeper that past couple nights, I woke up this morning and on my desktop my brother had left me this note Makes me wonder what the hell i was dreaming about.


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    dotsDear Amber/Sleep Talkingdots
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    Amber,
    I don't know if you remember it or not, but last night when you woke up, around 1:30 you asked me "Am I a moot point, axl?" After that, you asked if it would be possible to kill yourself, then loot your own body for parts to build a robot. You said "Just think about it. What if you only needed a kneecap, that'd be easy to get." After that you kinda mumbled a bit, then said "It makes me mad when you think I'm asleep and I'm not," and laid back down to go to sleep. Then at about 230, you said "I made six of them, Watermelon, haha watermelon. Then about another hour later you said "I can't sell a car for as much as a TV cause its fat...and you can't sell it"


    Just thought I'd let you know :D

    Axl





    Submitted on 2008-07-26 11:27:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HA HA !!! Thats great! I've been talking in my sleep alot lately as well apparently. it makes for great stories later on.
    | Posted on 2008-07-28 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]


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