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    Author: Killi
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 5/6/7
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    Description:
       This is similar to some personal experiences I have had at school


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    Wake in the morning, eat a bowl of cereal.
    Walk all the way to school, only to be bashed and bullied.
    Get the class late, have a talking to from the teacher.
    Walk all the way home again, get made fun of on the way.
    When I get home, mom rushes over
    "What happened? Why is your lip bleeding?"
    Stare her in the eyes.
    "Same as every other day..."




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