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What is love?

Author: Krinchinian
ASL Info:    20/f/pa
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Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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just something that popped into my head

What is love?

The first one hurts the most.
But what if you can't feel?
Then meaning is forever lost,
And love could never be real.
They say love has lost it's meaning.
We use this word too loosely.
So when they ask us if we do,
How can we answer truthfully?

Submitted on 2008-07-27 02:52:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love it. I can totally tell its one of those things that just forms itself in your brain already fully planned and rhyming. Thats what tells you youre a true poet, when this sorta thing just happens.
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| Posted on 2008-07-29 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]

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