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    dots Submission Name: Jack I sweardots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 647/1071/601
    Words: 346
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsJack I sweardots
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    Richard takes the four o'clock every Monday afternoon to get some time off from me and I can't say I blame him for anything
    On his way home he gets me bubblegum from the drugstore, he is such a dear
    But Lizzie Boredom is having trouble keeping it all together, she got attention deficit cancer cranking in her system
    Jack, I swear I need attention

    Don't let your mind get old, it'll wander and someday you will want to find me
    That silly boy is pouring tea into his coffee, stirring tears into his sugar cubes and falling for me over and over again
    Jack, I swear he needs a remedy

    Why am I always the girl who ends up with dirty knees and a wet dress?
    Because I trip and fall, thats who I am, you've known it all along
    So Richard steps it up and we go to gay bars to catch the singing
    I wish I was a better singer cause then I'd be good at something

    Don't watch yourself fall apart, it'll only confuse your nerves
    Sometimes we just need to find some space to feel complete
    This silly boy is churning butter like a romantic fool and I'm allergic to loveliness
    Jack, I swear you're such a mess, get it together

    Don't think I won't wait, I'm faithful
    And I read the news today, Paul said Oh Boy
    Seems like everything has changed, oh no
    I feel strange
    I feel adored but just a little too lonely
    And I know, you are just around the corner
    But you are always late and it seems I can never take it

    Richard takes the time to spend his dimes, I just save mine
    Autumn is coming, one more year until school is out forever like Alice said
    200 miles and I think my mind will get lonely
    I'm not feeling any better now but I think it might be fine fine
    Jack I swear, you need to get it right one time








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      the story in this is captivating and i like the way you reference your characters and give them thier own personalities throughout.
    | Posted on 2008-07-28 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]


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