A Single Star by SilentDreams42

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Submission Name: A Single Star dots

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Author:	SilentDreams42
Elite Ratio:	8 - 35/18/24
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Poetry/Alone
Total Views:	51
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	406

Description:
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A Single Star dots

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a single star
in the sky
i swear
you make me feel like i can fly

a single tear
runs down my cheek
surely
you are the only one i seek

when things get tough
there is no one
i look to you
you are the sun

for it is day
and you shine so bright
none can replace
the light of my life

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