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    dots Submission Name: Open Up Like The Reaperdots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    20/m/il
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 90/47/51
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 64
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    A thousand broken bones.
    This is blasphemy.
    Just listen to the way
    you talk to me.

    Am I not a holy entity?
    Am I not everything
    that you hoped I would be?

    Lay down your
    guns and books,
    Please cast your eyes
    to the skies without those
    side-glancing looks.

    I'll make it up to you.
    I'll cash in a million tickets,
    die a thousand times,
    if you'll just trust in me,
    and not read between the lines.

    So let me lead you
    beyond the golden gates,
    to the house up on the hill.
    Where the doors,
    open up to greet you
    and give in to your will.

    Hope for the Holy Ghost!
    Because when we're in hell
    we'll live it up best we know how.
    Because I fear no neverending
    torment,
    that's what we live now.

    I'll pray for a better day,
    I'll throw my arms to the sun.
    I'd walk my way to heaven,
    But for Hell, I'll run.

    I've made my decision.







    Submitted on 2008-07-28 02:42:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I nice rhythmic easy to follow. Just baiscally saying to someone that you will give it all up in the end as long as they see who you really are. Not bad at all.
    | Posted on 2008-07-28 00:00:00 | by Evil Jesture | [ Reply to This ]



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