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    dots Submission Name: Mindful(l)dots
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    Author: Me Rambling
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    dotsMindful(l)dots
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    Touch guidance, and
    Don't ask for my statement of question
    Receive unto yourself,
    Given from the hand that took...

    Everything

    Speak what you hear-
    And remain ignorant to reason
    Scratch away your patience to
    Even try to comprehend
    Your problems are on their own,
    He who isn't there
    Is the one in which you find solace and care:

    Proclaimed to be the powerful of the minded-weak,
    Or the weak powered, mindful(l) of shit

    Give up for no one loves you
    Received: undo yourself, and
    Given from the hand that took
    Everything away from you

    And burden is never fair,
    Love's been twisted, tied in rope
    Pulled down from Heaven above
    And given to your soul
    Taken out of this world, and
    Delivered to the footsteps below,

    I sat in the lap of the Lord
    Giving everything that I know,
    To pull myself back to you
    I've laid myself to rest
    To kill these dreams once and for all

    To run away from myself




    Submitted on 2008-07-28 08:44:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wont willfulness bite you ever time.. this was a nice read!
    | Posted on 2009-06-14 00:00:00 | by Luvmiannie | [ Reply to This ]
      I woudn't understand why you wouldn't want people to read this. It seems very insightful, even though I don't comprehend(sp?) it all. I'd like to, if you wouldn't mind explaining it. Other than not understandind everything,...it's a wonderful peice. Kudos!
    Beautiful, yet Corrupted
    | Posted on 2008-09-18 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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