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    dots Submission Name: Beliefsdots
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    Author: knudson18
    ASL Info:    18/male/Spencer, TN
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 7/6/25
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1109



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    dotsBeliefsdots
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    all that i believe in
    taken away from me
    all that i have given
    rip it away from me
    so much regret i've seen
    from the people i love
    if i gave them a push
    then i would feel the shove

    and all my beliefs
    are slammed into the ground
    i keep looking for them but
    they're nowhere to be found

    all that i'm becoming
    is starting to catch up
    with what i feel i've done
    drink my sins from this cup
    i'm torn and i am tired
    i'm wore out from this road
    how much more should i run?
    began fast, now i'm slow

    and all my beliefs
    are slammed into the ground
    i keep looking for them but
    they're nowhere to be found

    the martyrs are all gathering round
    to see what has been done
    but there is nothing new
    so view the fashion gun

    and all my beliefs
    are slammed into the ground
    i keep looking for them but
    they're nowhere to be found.




    Submitted on 2008-07-28 09:28:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is a good piece. unique for sure and heartfelt. sounds more like a song...im sure it actually could make a good one.
    | Posted on 2008-07-30 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]



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