My Happiest Moment -------------------------------------------
When I saw your smile
My darkness turned o light
You heart called out to mine
You are the most beautiful sight
I long to hold you in my arms
To keep you in my embrace
Gaze into your amazng brown eyes
And spread kisses across your face
You're everything I ever dreamed
An earthbound angel sent to me
I was rendered speechless
When told we were meant to be
I never thought I'd be so lucky
Never believed I'd find love true
I could never be happier
Than the moment I met you
Sweet poem, I hope you gave it to your jimmy
:-) I espcially love this line "An earthbound angel sent to me
I was rendered speechless
When told we were meant to be"
I think your poem was put together well, in a way that really described your happiest moment. Plus the last line really brought it all together.
Submission Name: My Happiest Moment
