Bitter end to me -------------------------------------------
Bitter love filled with warm hatred
Flowing through my heart
A bitter end to life
What did you do?
Overflowing waves
In your voice. Reflects.
Love. Hate.
I am here, are you too
Why did I fight so hard for you
Painful love toxic hate
The bitter end to me
Where are you?
Well this is a bit mysterious to my mind because in poetry nothing is ever straightforward. Otherwise it won’t be poetry I guess.
The thing with Life in this regard as I have been taught and led to realise, is that what ever you experience firstly comes form your Inner Self from whence it is projected towards something outside of you. The identity you project your feelings on cannot realize you Inner Self feelings and state of mind of what you may experience. The result is you project well enough but nothing else really happens. That is why the principle of forgiveness is so prevalent important: forgive yourself and all is solved. It’s not that simple of course but well worth a try. My poem Nostalgia refers to the same concept. Well I like this and made it a fav and 5 point score. Keep it up. Joachim.
There's a fine line between love and hate in that both are very strong emotions. Your first line drew that comparison for me with bitter love vs. warm hatred.
The punctuation in this piece is "uneven" in that you use it rather randomly. That's easily fixed, though.
I wish you well in love and hope to read more of your work.
Do not we all feel rejected at one point in our live, this poem made me think of my first love, how much did I love her, and I thought she loved me. Well we all moved on.
I like the way you described this love hate relationship.
If I were you I would change the love and the hate to the same entities, for example, "Bitter love filled with warm hatred", to "Bitter love filled with sweet hatred" or "Cold love filled with warm hatred" et...
You must keep on fighting, and some day you will win this war.
Submission Name: Bitter end to me
