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    dots Submission Name: feeling of despairdots
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    Author: essence of life
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    dotsfeeling of despairdots
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    I'm sad. I wanna write but my words left me once again stole by my ignorence.

    Lost in my illusions of life with them I'm lost and with no one wanting me I guess I'm alone.

    Sorry too tell u but with no help I fear I'll be lost forever.

    In turn forever forgotten despair is my name its my life my cross my destiny that I share with others.

    But I still am alone.




    Submitted on 2008-07-30 05:22:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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