You are a poet, you can invent words, we have a licence for it. I like "spacelessness" because there is not another word with htat meaning! Do you like "htat"? I think the meaning is vacant, but I love typos.
ah yeah it is good though...I don't mind spaciousness at all,its one of the better things about this poem I think,
a also liked the fading fade,it could be seen as gimmicky but the fact you used a word that isn't real elsewhere gives it enough continuity for it to add to the piece
yeah its empty and quiet and no brooding,but maybe kind of mournfull,I dunno
If I have to find my own view of what your trying to say here itd be that heavan and hell are only ways we can perceive existence,how we want to see it
Even though this is a venting poem, it doesn't patronise or force the author's opinion on you, but rather lets you decide what to think while cleverly illustrating the facts to point you in a certain direction. Excellent work.
Somehow, though, I feel that this poem is so far the bare bones of what it could be. Feed it lots of oatmeal and...
Actually, just flesh out some of the ideas, particularly in the middle. Also, I think "Conformity," though a fine topic, is not the ideal title, as it might make readers judge the quality of your poem before even reading it. It's a bit clichéd, too. I suggest a tite change.
Last thing: I love how the word "fades" fades in the third bit.
Submission Name: Conformity 
