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    dots Submission Name: Face Cancerdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 530
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Yeah, i was kind of stuck in self pity with this one, but I have started a long kist of work to cure myself. Anyway, got a job as a writer for a magazine. late guys.


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    dotsFace Cancerdots
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    Sometimes I would sit in front of the mirror and cry for hours
    Never knowing if my face would allow you to love me any longer
    And all these hours
    Gave me power
    And made me stronger
    And you would never see these tears
    But that one time i came out with all my fears,
    i'm scared of mirrors
    Never knowing if they would shatter in my face
    If it does, I know I'm a disgrace
    Its like a disease with its own race
    My own cancer on my face
    And I can't erase
    The taste
    Cuz i'll feel fake
    I feel like all my dreams are at stake
    Cuz one mistake
    They say its not too late
    But sometimes I debate
    This is the fate I hate
    And i feel ugly
    How could you hug me?
    The thought of kissing
    Seems absurd but I love the feeling
    I'm sick of stepping around revealing
    Whats gone wrong
    I can't even publicly sing my own song
    And you'll just play along
    Like its okay
    Can't you hear when I say
    I don't want to delay
    And I finally found a way
    For a cure
    I won't have to endure
    This pain any longer
    And I'm already so much stronger
    Everything could go wronger
    Than before
    So this time they'll close the door
    And it'll oppen to a wholee new world
    And I'll be me again
    And I could smile free again
    And my friends
    Would see me again
    For who I am
    Not who I'm damned




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