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    dots Submission Name: Not MINEdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 366
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 475



    Description:
       This is just something I wrote for someone. It deosnt mean anything. He's not mine and I dont want him. Not like that. Not in that way. Not in my life. He will never be MINE, as in the MINE i have now. And I'm so so sorry to mine for this. For real. I never meant for this to happen. And Im sorry i never told you, but I cant worry you like this while you are in there. not now, not yet. and I hope you could understand. and i hope you can forgie me.


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    dotsNot MINEdots
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    I feel like a demon
    Screamin at you
    i know this is wrong
    But I think that you're true
    I'm living a lie
    And I'm feeling so blue
    I hate this so much
    But he has no clue
    And I'm dying inside
    I'm killing my soul
    Cuz this is not me
    Yet with him, I'm free
    And you are not mine
    This is out of control
    I'm losing myself
    And the blade is so dull




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